This is the blog of Kelly Jennings, science fiction writer.
mine didn't rate on a scale of "how Hemmingway am I" but rather gave me the grade level and other doo-dads...20 of 105 sentences are hard to read.6 of 105 sentences are very hard to read.14 adverbs. Aim for 8 or fewer.3 words or phrases can be simpler.5 uses of passive voice. Aim for 21 or fewer.
You're far less Hemingway than I am!I got 0 of 60 sentences hard to read0 of 60 very hard1 adverb -- aim for 2 or fewer. (This part mystifies me -- what is their algorithm for deciding how many advers are okay?)0 words/phrases can be simpler0 uses of passive voice (the program does seem to be able to tell a passive from a progressive, which pleases me!)
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